Hi,
I just got a last chunck of comments from Vivek after having read the
intermediate draft of last week:
1) For the introduction he suggests:
In this Letter we report on a precise measurement of {V_ub| from a study
of the inclusive charmless SL decays B -> X_u l nu [2]. This analysis is
based on a novel technique in which one of the B mesons (B_reco) in the
decay Y(4S) -> B Bbar is fully reconstructed and the semileptonic decay of
the recoiling B meson is identified by the presence of an electron or
muon. While this technique results in a low overall event selection
efficiency..and flavor of the recoiling B mesons.`
2) for the second paragraph he suggests
The measurement presented here is based on a sample of about 89 million
collected near the Y(4S) resonance by the Babar detector [6] at the
PEP-II asymmetric energy e+e- storage ring at SLAC.
3) on the conclusion he says
It would be useful to say a line about where this inclusive analysis is
going in the future. Is this analysis systematic limited or are there
expectation for the theory error to decrease (with input from radiative
penguin etc)
I would say that we already satisfy his comments on introduction and
conclusions and that we could accept the correction to the second
paragraph ...
ciao
ric
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