On Fri, 29 Jul 2005, Concezio Bozzi wrote:
> 2) In the references you should add:
>
> S.W. Bosch, M. Neubert and G. Paz,
> ``Subleading shape functions in inclusive B decays''
> Nucl. Phys. B 699, 335 (2004) [arXiv:hep-ph/0402094]
>
> when referring to BLNP.
>
This is reference [6], the real (four authors) BLNP paper is reference [5]
and we cite always [5,6] when giving a reference for BLNP. I am not sure
what the point is.
> 3) We were surprised to see that your paper does not contain an
> acknowledgment to the many discussions we had with your group, or to the
> fact that we had provided you with a code to generate the partial rates.
> We hope this will be fixed in a revised version.
Should we add something and replace it on hep-ex? How about the BLL
authors?
> 4) Two small typos:
>
> a) Section 5.2 in the title: "BNLP" -> "BLNP"
>
> b) page 17 8th line from the top shouldn't "faction" be "fraction"?
This is fixed in cvs for future use.
Cheers,
Wolfgang
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