>> For at least the next fifteen years, the experiments at the Large Hadron Collider at CERN will drive the Energy Frontier program forward. The Higgs boson discovery at the LHC now becomes a precision study of the properties of this particle.  The high-luminosity LHC will measure Higgs boson couplings at the few-percent level and provide the first measurement of the Higgs self-coupling.  The steps of the LHC to 300 fb$^{-1}$ and then to 3000 fb$^{-1} will explore deeply for new particles produced through either the strong or the electroweak interactions.  They will probe for new dynamics of $W$, $Z$, and Higgs at TeV energies and study rare decays using a sample of billions of top quarks.  The LHC experiments have already proven their ability to work as global collaborations. Detector and accelerator components, technology and physics insight, and leadership from the US have played indispensible roles.
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> this sentence sounds as if the “from the US” only applies to leadership and this also sounds like an afterthought. 
> How about a bit rearranged sentence:
> US contributions to the leadership, detector and accelerator components, technology, and physics insight  have played indispensible roles.
> 
> Regards
> meenakshi


I agree with this suggestion. Starting the sentence with "US contributions" sounds better

Ashutosh
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