Dear Colleagues,
I attach new version of the short and long Energy Frontier documents.
I have made many corrections, in particular, those from the Higgs
group, and I have incorporated the new version of the major conclusions
supplied by Markus as explained in the previous email. I have also
added a new section to the main report, Section 1.2.3 and following,
which hopefully mirrors the changes in the summary report.
Please find a list of nontrivial changes, with line numbers in the 10-3
versions, attached as a txt file.
I still need to include lengthy lists of corrections offered by Markus and
Soeren. Please expect another set of new versions tomorrow.
There are further changes to be made. Send more!
Please refer to them by line
number and version (10-3 or 10-11).
Thank you all very much!
Michael
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Changes to the EF reports in response to comments from conveners:
There are three categories: major changes, nontrivial changes, number updates. The changes are given by line number in the 10-3 versions of the reports. Please check that the corrections you wanted were done correctly. I do not bother you with obvious typo corrections. Special thanks to Soeren, Sally, Rick, Andrei, Heather, Markus, and Ashutosh.
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Executive summary:
Major changes:
line 25 to line 52:
complete rewriting based on text from Markus. See the previous
email.
Nontrivial changes:
line 31-35 rewritten to address questions from Rick
line 71: paragraph incorporates clarifications requested by Rick.
line 108: clarification requested by Rick.
line 167-8 addition requested by Rick.
line 179-180 Higgs self-coupling sentence modified as requested by Rick.
line 189-190 rewritten as suggested by Rick.
line 191-192 change suggested by Heather
Number updates:
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Full EF report:
Major changes:
line 188 addition of a short section called "Dark matter"
line 190 change of the three list items to mirror the changes in the
short summary document Please read to the end of the section.
Nontrivial changes:
line 46-47 rewritten to clarify questions by Rick
line 71: paragraph incorporates clarifications requested by Rick.
line 108: clarification requested by Rick.
line 132: in all three classes -> in each of these classes (avoiding a confusion)
line 137-138 change requested by Sally
line 167-8 addition requested by Rick.
line 220-227 paragraph rewritten to clarify the relation between the most recent LHC
schedule and projection and our standard luminosities for this study.
line 246-247 changes in response to critique by Rick
line 321 estimates for gg fusion and VBF given, requested by Sally
line 325 clarification requested by Rick
line 328-330 clarified as requested by Rick
line 333 clarified as requested by Rick
line 340 5sigma changed to 3-5 sigma, requested by Rick
line 341 Sally wanted a qualification here, but it is not necessary. People can look
at the figures and at Table 1.1 and get the picture.
line 353 to 356 rewritten following suggestions of Rick
line 368-372 paragraph rewritten with clarifications from Andrei
line 369
line 433-4 Change in the "message" suggested by Rick
line 1009 Change in response to critique of Rick and Sally
line 1027 clarification requested by Rick -- but, exotic here really means exotic, e.g.,
decays to long-lived particles or to hidden valley
line 1029 Sally wanted this improved. I have borrowed Rick's language in line 433.
line 1090 new item 3 added
Number updates:
line 543-549 paragraphs replaced as requested by Ashutosh
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