Hoi,
the following is what I remembered to put down. Please add as
followups whatever I misunderstood, forgot, or misrepresented.
We decided to put all corrections to this into cvs by Friday, April 5.
We will then discuss about when exactly to upload a new version into
the system. At that point the BAD would probably benefit much from
editing by a single person (for some style consistency, etc).
Cheers,
--U.
Comments on BAD 347 raised during the reading of 03/28/02
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3 Add plots with Mx(generator) for b2c, b2u (res, non-res, and mix)
5 Remove 1.1.2
Remove reference to exact value of BR(b->Xlnu) we'll be using
6 level of details in 1.2 very inhomogeneous
7 clarification of last paragraph (that it has nothing to do with
breco normalization)
8 Lumi for run 1 and run 2
define 'integrated purity'
change 'X' to 'Y' to avoid confusion with hadronic recoil system X
yield stability over time
redo table once 'killer' files are ready
10 update table
add details on background and signal MC (res and non-res)
versions of decay files
make sure that all SP4 has version > 10.0.2
11 Add paragraph describing/giving overview over analysis
Add new subsection on Semileptonic/Reconstruction/Recoil (whatever)
Add remark about Pid Killing
12 Add muon ID description
Time-dependence of lepton ID
remove all occurences of 'crucial'
kaon ID selector optimization
kaon momentum spectrum in data and MC, efficiency
13 kshort selection into own subsection. Spectrum in data and MC. Efficiency
14 streamline/rearrange 3.6
15 "one D meson" needs to be rewritten
KL remarks need rewrite
17 What is the generator-level p* spectrum in the B restframe
remove Figure 9
replace "Vub extraction" with something less jargon-like
Move Table 5-8 into Appendix and replace with a summary version
Add comments on efficiencies to guide the reader
remove efficiency for b2u in b2u-depleted sample
22 Normalization of comparison plots to #B
to rotate or not to rotate the plots
comment each set of plots
add appendix with comparison of generic and cocktail MC
additional plots on #kaons, #kshorts, #neutrals, #tracks,
momentum spectrum of ("right-sign") hadrons
are errors taken into account properly for Kolmogorov tests?
Order of bullets not obvious
change 'asymmetric' cut
change "$M_\nu^2$ into $M_{miss}^2$
remark about statistical error optimization only
26 change sigma(Vub) into something more straightforward
28 need to verify IBU yields with yields in table
label/caption table
29 redo optimization
43 indices confusion
eliminate most of 4.2
move section 4 into to-be-written subsection of section 3
show bias of Mx(fit) as a function of Mx
49 change title into something like 'Measurement Technique' (or whatever)
mixing correction not yet described
unify usage into signal depleted/enhanced (or b2u depleted/enhanced)
show ARGUS shape parameter as a function of Mx for background
and signal
change title of 5.1.1 ('tag' 'breco' and other things were discussed)
50 caption of figure 36 needs more elaboration
51 fit not (adequately) described, formula, binned LH, ...
efficiency(breco) on generic instead of cockatil
add errors (even \pm x.y) to correction factors
52 plots per category for b2u enhanced and depleted
p53 label axes
give numbers used in fit
quantify goodness of fit
