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Is there a latest version? I've kind of lost track? -Eric On Aug 25, 2013, at 4:00 PM, Graham W. Wilson wrote: > Dear Michael and Chip, > > Hopefully we are now converging. > > The sentence on ILC is a bit of a mouthful. It mixes three different and important points while neglecting to tell the > reader that the machine would collide electrons and positrons. > Suggest splitting it as follows. Not sure this suggestion is necessarily the best. I think it should say detectors somewhere > - but that request from me that you incorporated ... has not made the current sentence any more digestible. > > "A global effort has now completed the technical design of the International Linear Collider (ILC) accelerator > and detectors that will provide these capabilities." > => > "A global effort has now completed the technical design of the International Linear Collider (ILC). > This accelerator and its detectors will provide these physics capabilities with e+e- collisions." > (or perhaps one could use a ; or : and make it one sentence). > > I think it is important to make it clear that the basic ILC program is e+e-. There is also the possibility of > e-e-, e- gamma, and gamma gamma. Those are not excluded - but e+e- is essential and sufficient for the > discussion here. > > regards > Graham > > ######################################################################## > Use REPLY-ALL to reply to list > > To unsubscribe from the SNOWMASS-EF list, click the following link: > https://listserv.slac.stanford.edu/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=SNOWMASS-EF&A=1 ------------------------------------------------------------------- Eric Prebys, Fermi National Accelerator Laboratory Office: 630-840-8369, Email: [log in to unmask] WWW: http://home.fnal.gov/~prebys ------------------------------------------------------------------- ######################################################################## Use REPLY-ALL to reply to list To unsubscribe from the SNOWMASS-EF list, click the following link: https://listserv.slac.stanford.edu/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=SNOWMASS-EF&A=1