more changes to the EF report:

these changes are listed by line number in the 10-12 versions of the short and long reports.  

Short document
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Major changes:


Nontrivial changes:

89   clarification requested by Rick

150, 159   Higgs compositeness -> top quark and Higgs compositeness
                   following Kaustubh's advice



Number updates:



Long document
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Major changes:


Nontrivial changes:

42, 45  responding to Doreen, I changed "1 TeV" in both places to the weaker
          "at the TeV energy scale"

164   change in this sentence requested by Markus
184, 188   more precise formulation of the "bound", suggested by Kaustubh

366  Clarification suggested by Rick
408-9  Clarification suggested by Rick

750  remark on insensitivity to new physics suggested by Kaustubh
777, 808, 814   Higgs compositeness -> top quark and Higgs compositeness
                   following Kaustubh's advice

1040  Clarification requested by Rick
1153  Clarification requested by Rick


Number updates:

812-3    numbers updated following Kaustubh



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