Dear all, Thank you very much for all the comments. I uploaded the 3rd version at the same place. https://agenda.linearcollider.org/conferenceDisplay.py?confId=6429 I'm sorry if I missed some of your comments. Some comments: - page 14: I was requested to replace the d0 resolution plot to SiD's. But it's the optimization page and my main point is to compare performance with different pixel size. I just add SiD plot beside ILD's as a compromise. - page 18: I added advantage of SiD tracker. Please let me know if you have better description of it. - page 24: I changed this page to just introduce "some" of our technologies. If you have a picture of hexagonal SiD detector, I'd like to replace the drawing to it. - page 25: SiD muon detector drawing seems too technical and I do not want to explain much about it so I keep ILD drawing. Forward drawing has been replaced. - general: While your comments are still very welcome, I think I should not change slides too much from now if it's not critical. I should rather practise, and if it's not possible to explain in time, I may omit or skip some slides (my talk is 20 minutes including discussion). - I got the ICHEP program book, and it shows the previous order of our talks... Best regards, Taikan On Wed, 2 Jul 2014 09:51:19 +0900 Jan Strube <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > Dear Taikan, > > Thanks for your updates. > The slides show a lot of improvement. > I have a few comments: > Slide 2: The table and text seem to be cut off at the right edge. The pdf only shows "Integ. L” > > Slide 3: > The “Green sign” is expected in ~5 years? This seems rather long. > I was under the impression that the MEXT experts panel has to finish their report at the end of fiscal year 2015, i.e. before April 1st, 2016. > > Slide 4: > "Big loophole in LHC search” is a rather aggressive formulation. There will be mostly LHC physicists, and we need to recruit some of them to ILC. How about: "ILC is sensitive to LHC blind spots”. > > Slide 5: > I don’t understand the (qq) in the line 'One Higgs per 100 collision’ (qq) > Do you have a number for the LHC trigger? Maybe collision rate ?> trigger output rate? > In the red box, “performance” ?> “resolution”. > > Slide 6: The left text box covers your footer. > pixel vertex detector ?> low-mass, small pixel vertex detector. > (maybe also silicon tracker ?> low-mass silicon tracker) > This slide should mention that both concepts fit vtx, trk and both calorimeters inside the coil. > This is to optimize for PFA. > > Slide 7: > Maybe mention a typical size of the calorimeter readout, so that people get an idea. > > Slide 8: > Although I see it more frequently recently, I’m not a big fan of exclamation marks in talks. It looks like you’re shouting. > “Physics-based optimization is important” ?> “Physics requirements drive detector optimization” > > Slide 13: > Time tagging ?> time stamping > > Slide 17: > SiD: silicon strip only (5 layers) is technically correct but it may give the wrong impression that our tracks only have 5 measurements. > The point is that we have 10 silicon layers, 5 pixel, 5 strip. Maybe Marcel can have a suggestion. > > I’m boarding now. I’ll be happy to take another look at the conference. > Good luck. > > Cheers, > Jan > > > > On Jul 2, 2014, at 4:11, Taikan Suehara <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > > > Dear all, > > > > I uploaded the second version of my talk at the same indico page. > > https://agenda.linearcollider.org/conferenceDisplay.py?confId=6429 > > > > Any comments, corrections, opinions etc. are welcome. > > Our talks are scheduled at Saturday morning. > > > > Best regards, > > Taikan > > > > > > 2014-06-24 9:40 GMT+02:00 Behnke, Ties <[log in to unmask]>: > > Dear all, > > > > please be reminded of todays rehearsal for the ICHEP concept talks. The indico agenda may be found under > > https://agenda.linearcollider.org/conferenceDisplay.py?confId=6429 > > > > To connect to the meeting please use > > > > http://fuze.me/24985043 > > > > Best regards, Marcel and Ties > > > > -- > > Dr. Ties Behnke > > DESY FLC > > e-mail Ties.Behnke <at> desy.de > > Tel +49 40 8998 4918 > > > > > > > > -- > > -- > > Taikan SUEHARA > > International Center for Elementary Particle Physics (ICEPP), > > The University of Tokyo > > Mail: [log in to unmask] > > > > Use REPLY-ALL to reply to list > > > > To unsubscribe from the SID-ALL list, click the following link: > > https://listserv.slac.stanford.edu/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=SID-ALL&A=1 > > > > -- > Tohoku University > Department of Physics > Aramaki, Aoba-ku, > Sendai 980-8578, Japan > > TEL: +81 22 795 5730 > FAX: +81 22 795 6729 -- Taikan Suehara / 末原 大幹 九州大学 大学院理学研究院 物理学部門 基礎粒子系物理学講座 素粒子実験研究室 〒812-8581 福岡県福岡市東区箱崎6-10-1 Tel: 092-642-2551 / FAX: 092-642-2762 Mail: [log in to unmask] ######################################################################## Use REPLY-ALL to reply to list To unsubscribe from the SID-ALL list, click the following link: https://listserv.slac.stanford.edu/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=SID-ALL&A=1