Dear Taikan, Thanks for your updates. The slides show a lot of improvement. I have a few comments: Slide 2: The table and text seem to be cut off at the right edge. The pdf only shows "Integ. L” Slide 3: The “Green sign” is expected in ~5 years? This seems rather long. I was under the impression that the MEXT experts panel has to finish their report at the end of fiscal year 2015, i.e. before April 1st, 2016. Slide 4: "Big loophole in LHC search” is a rather aggressive formulation. There will be mostly LHC physicists, and we need to recruit some of them to ILC. How about: "ILC is sensitive to LHC blind spots”. Slide 5: I don’t understand the (qq) in the line 'One Higgs per 100 collision’ (qq) Do you have a number for the LHC trigger? Maybe collision rate —> trigger output rate? In the red box, “performance” —> “resolution”. Slide 6: The left text box covers your footer. pixel vertex detector —> low-mass, small pixel vertex detector. (maybe also silicon tracker —> low-mass silicon tracker) This slide should mention that both concepts fit vtx, trk and both calorimeters inside the coil. This is to optimize for PFA. Slide 7: Maybe mention a typical size of the calorimeter readout, so that people get an idea. Slide 8: Although I see it more frequently recently, I’m not a big fan of exclamation marks in talks. It looks like you’re shouting. “Physics-based optimization is important” —> “Physics requirements drive detector optimization” Slide 13: Time tagging —> time stamping Slide 17: SiD: silicon strip only (5 layers) is technically correct but it may give the wrong impression that our tracks only have 5 measurements. The point is that we have 10 silicon layers, 5 pixel, 5 strip. Maybe Marcel can have a suggestion. I’m boarding now. I’ll be happy to take another look at the conference. Good luck. Cheers, Jan On Jul 2, 2014, at 4:11, Taikan Suehara <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > Dear all, > > I uploaded the second version of my talk at the same indico page. > https://agenda.linearcollider.org/conferenceDisplay.py?confId=6429 > > Any comments, corrections, opinions etc. are welcome. > Our talks are scheduled at Saturday morning. > > Best regards, > Taikan > > > 2014-06-24 9:40 GMT+02:00 Behnke, Ties <[log in to unmask]>: > Dear all, > > please be reminded of todays rehearsal for the ICHEP concept talks. The indico agenda may be found under > https://agenda.linearcollider.org/conferenceDisplay.py?confId=6429 > > To connect to the meeting please use > > http://fuze.me/24985043 > > Best regards, Marcel and Ties > > -- > Dr. Ties Behnke > DESY FLC > e-mail Ties.Behnke <at> desy.de > Tel +49 40 8998 4918 > > > > -- > -- > Taikan SUEHARA > International Center for Elementary Particle Physics (ICEPP), > The University of Tokyo > Mail: [log in to unmask] > > Use REPLY-ALL to reply to list > > To unsubscribe from the SID-ALL list, click the following link: > https://listserv.slac.stanford.edu/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=SID-ALL&A=1 > -- Tohoku University Department of Physics Aramaki, Aoba-ku, Sendai 980-8578, Japan TEL: +81 22 795 5730 FAX: +81 22 795 6729 ######################################################################## Use REPLY-ALL to reply to list To unsubscribe from the SID-ALL list, click the following link: https://listserv.slac.stanford.edu/cgi-bin/wa?SUBED1=SID-ALL&A=1