--- docs/pubs/0001-lcdd/lcdd-paper.tex	2014-08-11 22:21:39 UTC (rev 3251)
+++ docs/pubs/0001-lcdd/lcdd-paper.tex	2014-08-11 22:35:55 UTC (rev 3252)
@@ -9,7 +9,6 @@

 %% -Add more text for the nonprojective_cylinder and projective_zplane segmentation sections describing how they work, etc.
 %% -Add segmentation visualization cartoons.
 %% -Add subsections for CliC and MuColl under Examples.

-%% -Flesh out the HPS section under Examples.  It should be a full paragraph.

 %% -Add additional detector graphics including (possibly) cutaway view of SiD, replacement for the HPS graphic placeholder, etc.
 %% -Inclusion of all necessary additional references/notes where applicable.
 %%

@@ -602,10 +601,8 @@

 
 \subsection{Heavy Photon Search}
 

-The Heavy Photon Search (HPS) is a direct Dark Matter search.  Its test run detector was simulated using LCDD, in a variety of configurations.

+The Heavy Photon Search (HPS) is a direct Dark Matter search using a fixed target experiment.  The detector has a silicon strip tracker and a lead tungstate crystal calorimeter which have both been modeled to a high level of detail in simulation.  LCDD has been used throughout the design process to study numerous detector models and variations for the 2012 Test Run as well as the full experiment, scheduled to run in fall of 2014.  In particular, LCDD has been invaluable for testing different configurations of the silicon tracker modules, including variations on the number of total layers and the layout of the sensors.

-%% TODO: Include more about HPS in this section.
-

 %% FIXME: This is a placeholder graphic only!
 \begin{figure}[htpb]
 \caption{The HPS Experiment.}